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In this project I was working with Sasha, Dylan and Emily  and we decided to create a story for kids

Here is a link to what we made.

In this project we decided that our success criteria were: (list the criteria you created on slide 7)

A good Children’s Story needs...
Why is this important?
Strong characters who evoke strong emotion
So Children get attached to the character.
One that contains a simple and original idea presented with clarity and great power.
So children can read it easily
One that makes the world seem larger and more interesting.
So children get attached to the book
Make sure the words we use is easy for children to understand
So they understand what we are saying
Make sure we have pretty pictures
So they get interested in the pictures

Overall our project met/do not meet this criteria because met the criteria because we tested them on some children and they thought that the pictures were nice, the characters were cute, especially the sun.

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